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Errata & Corrections
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Some errors are, unfortunately, unavoidable. If there's ever a second printing, most of this will hopefully be fixed; until then, I hope nobody got too confused... The worst problem is in Chapter Four, during Kei's dream-sequence. She remembers being at Steelgod three years after the fortress' fall, during the Pacification. Unfortunately, the timeline says this is impossible. Steelgod fell in 6088, and the Pacification continued until roughly 6100. The dream-events therefore happened in 6091, thirteen years before Kei's birth in 6104. Later she talks about being trained at Steelgod, which makes sense, since draekere training moved there in 6100. Not much to say except 'Oops.' I got a little too involved in the history of Steelgod and forgot when it occured. The events described should have taken place just after Kei's 'graduation' from draekere training, in around 6121. So you can either strike the references to the year and the fact that the Pacification is ongoing, or imagine that Kei's dreams don't exactly correspond to reality; your choice. The rest of the errors are more mundane typos or omissions. A few missing scene-breaks stitched scenes together, resulting in some point-of-view confusion. If you find an error not on this list, leave me a note on the forum and I'll put it here!
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